The sequence's structure simultaneously gives and denies this poem that inviolability. This is Rich's most overtly erotic poem to date, and she may have simply been unable to politicize its intimacies:. Except possibly for one excessively sentimental phrase "the innocence and wisdom of," a phrase whose conventionality suggests how difficult Rich found the poem to write " The Floating Poem, Unnumbered " succeeds in being both tender and sensual. We may even hear in these lines a wry echo of the pervasive garden imagery of her earliest work, but in this poem at least we are not altogether removed from those "paths fern-fringed and delicate" of A Change of World where "innocent sensuality abides.
One reads the first part of the sequence wondering if any of the poems will risk more frank physical description. Given that sense of hesitant anticipation, it is emotionally appropriate that this pivotal poem be unnumbered and symbolically free of all historical entanglement.
Yet one can also say that Rich has left the sequence with a project unfinished and perhaps still to come, one that would be even more challenging to her audiences historicizing of erotic pleasure. As Foucault has argued, the privileging of sexuality as a special site for authentic self-expression is itself historically determined.
Foucault's challenge to our confidence in the ahistorical character of sexuality is implicit in much that Rich has previously written about relations between the sexes.follow link
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Indeed her recognition here that lesbian sexuality is "outside the law" is historicized exactly as Foucault argues: As Rich herself has written, lesbianism is a conflux "of the self-chosen woman, the forbidden 'primary intensity' between women, and also the woman who refuses to obey, who has said 'no' to the fathers" OLS, ; the impulse toward "the breaking of a taboo" cannot be separated from that "electric and empowering charge between women"--"an engulfed continent which rises fragmentedly to view from time to time only to become submerged again. Yet Rich will have to acknowledge the cost of these insights--both to herself and to her audience.
For where history and politics are concerned, knowledge does not necessarily produce freedom. And history touches even our simplest pleasures. This touch is political" WITC, By focusing on what the poem itself can actually do or fail to do in the presence of that unacceptable, undeniable reality, Rich also creates a compelling record of our other human options. They are fewer and they are more problematic than her exhortatory poetry would lead us to believe.
Yet we are also more driven to choose that small ground on which some witness can be given, for we are ourselves already being chosen by "the cruelty of our times and customs" PSN, From Our Last First Poets: Vision and History in Contemporary American Poetry. One sees this epic theme developing fully in the middle section of The Dream of a Common Language, but articulated in a form conventionally associated with intimate romance materials. They outline the story of a love affair, moving from union to estrangement, with the focus firmly upon the meditative "I" of the poet.
This sequence is, as it traditionally has been, the love poetry of a conscious mind, for love is a disciplined and intelligent social art. It goes without saying that the lovers are women, and in her treatment of this subject lies the revolutionary nature of Rich's sequence. The world of the love affair is not "closeted," not closed off in romance; it is an epic world which shadows forth the destruction of an old order and the founding of a new. Her bold destruction of generic expectations is part of her apocalyptic theme; only in a completely new world, it suggests, can sonnets be used seriously for epic material.
This is a vision of social and moral renewal, not of orgasmic transcendence, and it indicates the precise relationship for Rich between the bonding of women and social transformation. The Lesbian love bespeaks a new moral, social order, and if it seems to have more in it of hand-holding than of liebestod, that is precisely why Rich can make it the basis of an epic rather than the ending of a tragedy. It is significant that the sexual consummation poem is called "Floating," and can be read at any point in the sequence.
Tristan und Isolde is scarcely the story, women at least should know the difference between love and death. The love affair ends as the lover goes off "in fugue," but its legacy is a self recognized as whole and creative, together with a vision of a new social order.
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The act of breaking from her lover, paradoxically, by leaving her alone brings her to realize her own power and value:. She also realizes that the world in which she now lives is hostile not only to women but to bonding, civitas, of any sort:. Can it be growing colder when I begin to touch myself again, adhesions pull away? Am I speaking coldly when I tell you in a dream or in this poem, There are no miracles?
I told you from the first I wanted daily life, this island of Manhattan was island enough for me. It is apparent that the relationship of the magic circle to the daily life of Manhattan exists only psychically, and by a struggle "heroic in its ordinariness. Rich's poetics of transgression become a source of "truth" in her "Twenty-One Love Poems. Here Rich attempts to make a poetry that refuses to succumb to the lies she must utter while living within the confines of a heterosexual culture. These poems demonstrate the difficulties of fusing a poetics out of politics, for they raise a question fundamental to Rich's project: If women have been stifled by being kept in a heterosexual society they reject, can a rejection of that society's mores itself free the poet, and thus restore to her the capacity of originative language?
On this subject, Rich elsewhere remarks that "heterosexuality as an institution has also drowned in silence the erotic feelings between women. I myself lived half a lifetime in the lie of that denial. That silence makes us all, to some degree, into liars. To express, openly and without hesitation, her feelings as they develop in a lesbian relationship becomes a way of escaping the "silence and lies" which heretofore governed "women's love for women.
Merely to eliminate an overt stigma, to reject the veil of obfuscation, will not of itself produce good poetry no matter how liberating a gesture for the poet's psyche. What this lesbian relationship, as a ground of experience, does offer the woman poet, is the possibility of escaping the anxieties of male-dominated poetic influence.
Ideally, Rich can thus draw on both female and male precursors while maintaining the authority that comes from a description of life that at once taps the more generally recognized emotions associated with eros, while simultaneously centering the poetry in a relationship that excludes the male consciousness--hence, the male poet. Helpful though sexual truth-telling may be, however, it does not resolve the more difficult problem these poems so starkly articulate: In her essay, "When We Dead Awaken: Writing as Re-Vision," Rich discusses the relationship between woman's survival in this world and man's authority as the one who names what we experience:.
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And this drive to self-knowledge, for women, is more than a search for identity: A radical critique of literature, feminist in its impulse, would take the work first of all as a clue to how we live, how we have been living, how we have been led to imagine ourselves, how our language has trapped as well as liberated us, how the very act of naming has been till now a male prerogative, and how we can begin to see and name and therefore live-afresh. The politics of experience becomes in The Dream of a Common Language a question of style; for the poems either assert in a strong rhetorical voice or enact in a more muted conversational manner, the distinction between gender-based differences in language.
As Rich herself states, "Poetry is, among other things, a criticism of language. This transference foremost allows the woman to be both subject and object of consciousness, the agent of desire and its aim. The poems' language, their attempts to bear witness to the individual, private quality of an intimate relationship, moves between tones of understatement and forthright assertions of the difficulties sustaining such a poetry in the face of a tradition of silence, in the face of "centuries of books unwritten piled behind these shelves.
Rich confronts the inherent problem of combining these aims as she questions the mythopoetic enterprise itself--the conversion of private experience into an alternative program: But Rich sees this attempt also as a kind of evasion from the even more disruptive goal of centering the female self and making that self the origin for naming all that stands outside it:.
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And how have I used rivers, how have I used wars to escape writing of the worst thing of all-- not the crimes of others, not even our own death, but the failure to want our freedom passionately enough so that blighted elms, sick rivers, massacres would seem mere emblems of that desecration of ourselves? The question of renaming the world is at the heart of these these poems because Rich perceives the necessity of escaping the boundaries of convention to make a new world "by women outside the law" XIII. Let it be a book that all students in Intermediate classes read. Jamil Soomro, New York City.
Very true about Lahore. The contribution of this great city in the development of Urdu in the 20th Century cannot be under-estimated. Dr Saif Mohammed has confirmed himself as a servant of Urdu. Delhi gave birth to Urdu and saw it flourish.
Congratulations to Dr Mohammed and Dawn for including such a wonderful piece. It is a pleasure to read.
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Lahore was the capital of the Mughal Sultanate too. The great architecture from the Mughal period is enough to debunk your claim that Lahore is or was a Sikh city. Even during Sikh rule Lahore was a Muslim city. Saif Mehmood, Your topic is lovely to read, yet could not go through all, what a smell I have is Urdu-e-Moualla starts from Dehli and end at Dehli. I was first to start speaking Urdu with my daughter some 40 years before and was first in my family to speak Urdu with my kid instead of Punjabi.
Pakistan National Language is Urdu, it is a language full of love and smell of fruits. Mirza Ghalib if have been today alive and eating Mangoes of super quality from Pakistan, should have enjoyed his life instead of sadness. Still have highest rate of education and per capita income. Being a Delhite I fondly read your newspaper online its origin from Daryagunj Delhi.
It is an unbiased newspaper with excellent articles liked this one. After reading it , it feels now I am in dilli and attending a ceremony full of poets in Dilli Dabar Amazing piece of work Wonderful example of imagery. It was really amazing to visit 'Dehri' with the author.
I wish in earnest to walk through the cacophonous alleys, to witness the unruly traffic and obnoxious-tolerant people of the Sprawling Megalopolis. This is such an amazing read! Almost makes me wanna travel back in time and see things through their eyes. What an excellent article! I would love to share it with Urdu lovers and wish I had Dr. Saif Mahmood's email or phone number. Please help if you know. Dear reader, online ads enable us to deliver the journalism you value. Please support us by taking a moment to turn off Adblock on Dawn. Dr Saif Mahmood Published Sep 21, In the eighteenth century, Mir said: In the middle of the twentieth century, Percival Spear compared Delhi with Rome: His poetry was romantic and his expression typical of his home-region: On the coin was inscribed a Persian couplet: In a parody of this couplet, also in Persian, Zatalli lashed out at the Emperor, referring to rampant corruption, even in the distribution of public supplies and food: Mushafi had famously said: Avtar Sep 21, A former Delhiwala myself, enjoyed reading this piece.
Zak Sep 21, Ranjan Sep 21, Finally, to take a step without feet. She is not that earthly beloved: Know the lift of your heel, the glide of your foot. Become familiar with the way you purse your lips then let them part, just the slightest bit, when I lean into your space and kiss you. I want to know the joy of how you whisper.
Live where you fear to live. There is a void in your soul, ready to be filled. Dance in the middle of the fighting. Dance in your blood. But when You left my eyes went with You. Now, how will I cry?
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